Doing a contest isn't, in and of itself, the interesting part. You can get the details of the contest by clicking here. The prizes caught my attention. Their supportive nature intrigued me. And for this first ever Follow My Lead Flash Fiction Contest, she's giving away Roland Yeoman's End of Days. I couldn't pass up this opportunity so I'm submitting a flash fiction piece.
Here's the prompt: The streets of this restless city never slept...
Here's the picture to go along with the prompt:
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And here is my flash fiction piece:
The streets of this restless city never slept. Drunken tourists shuffled along, not a care in
the world, bumping elbows into strangers.
Offered beer breath laughter instead of apologies. Such lack of courtesy demanded attention, but
not from me. In a flash-vision, I saw
the young men seal their fate in the next bar.
A brawl, preventable were it not for hot heads and alcohol-strained
livers. A night in a cell would do them
good
From my blue-lit balcony, I watched a couple walk arm-in-arm
down the cobblestone lane, a woman who smiled mischievously up at a husband
that was not hers. He leaned down to
waiting lips and kissed her. An
iridescent light cast a halo around his wedding band as he slipped it off his
finger and into his pocket. Of the many,
I chose the husband. His choice in the
situation turned the tide. They parted
from their kiss, no hint of remorse in his smile. I closed my eyes to let the consequences of
my choice whir before me: A young
brunette, veiled and saddened. Definitely not the blonde clutched in his
arms before me. The widow rested her head upon the shoulder of a man with a
straight back and heart pouring forth in pity and love. A little boy, too,
fatherless, but not for long…and better off for it.
A smile curled my lips. He will be mourned but something good would come of his death, especially for my wasting body. Curse that river woman and her poisons. Then again, I suppose I shouldn’t have slept with her husband. Now damned as the mistress of Death, taking life is how I must live. Though the streets of this restless city never sleep, it will no longer be so for one.





























Fits the mood of the scene well!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Alex. It was a fun piece to write.
DeleteIt's so blasted easy to be immersed in your writing. Brilliant, Angela! :)
ReplyDeleteAwww...thanks David :-)
DeleteI loved this, I was totally hooked!
ReplyDeleteI'm quite glad you enjoyed it :-)
DeleteAhh...I'm the judge, so I'll withhold my comments, EXCEPT this one; Right now, my head is tingling (or crawling!) with, "Curse that woman and her poisons." Talk about gooseflesh!
ReplyDeleteAnd a GIGANTIC thank you, Angela for posting such a fabulous announcement of the contest!!! You absolutely, hands up, ROCK. :)))
It was my pleasure to announce it. When I saw you were doing this, I just HAD to post about it :-)
DeleteI'm not much of a flash fiction person but WOW Angela. Love what you did with this prompt! Good luck in the contest.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Raelyn. Took some cutting to get the word count. Man how I love to ramble lol!!!
DeleteOOOOOH! Very intriguing! Fun piece, Angela!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for checking it out :-)
DeleteVery intriguing, Angela. I loved it :-)
ReplyDeleteI will check out Candilynn's Contest - I'm due to stop by her blog anyway!
Cool. I bet other entries are fantastic!
DeleteThis looks like so much fun! Thanks for sharing! :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you had a chance to check it out :-)
DeleteSo eloquent, as usual. And dark! I always love your stuff, Angela:)
ReplyDeleteAwwww, Gwen. Thank you so much.
DeleteThat is creepy, Angela. I like it! I could envision an entire novel played out from this little piece of narrative.
ReplyDeleteHmmm...I hadn't thought of that. Might be something to consider. Definitely could not be a YA novel lol!!!
DeleteI'm caught by the interesting texture of your characters and situations. So good.
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